Good but not quite great
I've always thought about making a movie like this but I don't enough animating skills nor the skills to draw very well. But anyway onto your flash movie.
I really like the idea, but as another guy said this could have been way better. It didn't really have any big conflicts and the ones that I saw were minimal. I would have liked to see how an .swf passes judgement. Or what happens if one gets blammed? I could go on and on about this, but its not bad, I think its a good movie. These are just some personal preferences.
I think the static in between skits ruined it. Since you are going for that random, quick humor, I think it would have been better if it had just cut to the next scene right away. I only gave a 3 for humor because I didn't really laugh, I knew what was going on most the time and the Zelda skit gave me a grin so that was it for me. I've seen so many of these sprite blooper movies that it kills the value of whats funny.
These are some things I would work on:
-Voice Acting (not too keen on the British accent all the time, and also get some other types of people)
[exmaples: Carlos, Peter, and Taquan]
-Dialogue (seemed ok, but didn't really feel like the type of speech Blizzard would have used)
Other than that, everything else was really good.
what to think
Was ok, but I was waiting for like something to develop. Instead it all just kinda ended, felt cut-off. Looks like you had an idea there, just needed to put some more into it. As others have said this movie had a weird feeling to it, but that just doesn't do it for me. Obviously these people voting 10's don't have much depth.
There's really not much more I can say about this but just spend more time on your next project. This should help improve your score. But if its weird you want, then get more weird I guess...
Average & too long!
Courage ain't gonna do a thing without a weapon. I'm just wondering something, does nobody like that kid? I mean he walks down a hallway and then kids start runnin up on him for no reason. I mean, personally, I would never go throwing my fists at a kid with a gun or a knife. And by the time he reached the 'bullies' with guns they should have just ran away. I mean, that one kid took out a couple classroomss worth of kids just by himself.
Anyway, I guess he can look back at it all now and say "Was it really worth it?" LOL, I bet Satan would just be laughing in his face.
I thought the green guy was the boss (that would explain longer reach). It was a nice job at a xiaoxiao movie, but I think it lasted too long. If you were to make it a little shorter it would be better. And also I didn't like the choice of music, but thats just personal taste so I can't mark you down for that.
I clicked out once they were running through the caves. This may sound harsh but that was stupid. As soon as the movie started and they were getting shot at, I knew right away that this would be something I'd hate. Not my type of humor, (and I don't get how anyone else finds this funny). With that being said, I give you a 4/10 - becuase the sound was bad quality but the drawings were alright.
Since the movie was supposed to be funny, which to me it wasn't funny at all... I'll rate this a 5/10. I watched this with a straight face the entire time.
Btw- I thought the end was too predictable with the big explosion and having the retard win.
I liked it but...
It was too short. The animation was smooth and well done. Graphics (even though they were stick figures) were pretty cool. Excellent choice of sound, overall it had a good flow.
I did a 'sort by rating' and went to the last few pages, its all the same stuff "omg you suck" blah blah shut up. Give some constructive critisism or keep quiet. I personally love the old school look of stick movies, honestly I think you have lots of talent... Maybe you could start up a super-hero comic-style stick figure series and explain how he gets the fire power ability (just a thought).
Make your upcoming movies longer and I also think you should cut down on the swearing (not that it offends me but I think its just unnecessary for this type of film). That about covers it, good luck.
that was wonderful
its nice to finally see a doom movie on this site. at first I thought the game was it... lol. but after seeing the movie, I think i'll add it to my favorites. I think I need to watch this one again. overall, this was done very well.
I would love to see another...
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